This is about all the gear that you need to play cricket. You need shin pads that go on your legs and when you put them on and strap it it has to point inside. Now it is the gloves it is used for your hand so it doesn't hurt that much . If you are a boy you will need this, a box it goes in your private place. You can have an arm pad just if you want it goes on your left or you right if you are left armed it goes on your right and on the upside.And now it is the last one you have to strip the helmite onto your head.
I am going to tell you about how to bowl. It is simple, ok so you have to run up with the ball and bring it over your head and let go when your arm is at your eye. Do it slowly first and then go faster every time.
Now the last thing I am going to tell you about the rules
There is a Line on the field and if you bowl you are not allowed to step over the line
You have to wear all of the gear
And now I have a challenge for you, you have to get 1 more rule have fun
My goal is to: Add more prescriptive words
I like that you put paragraphs and you put it in your goal.
ReplyDeleteThanks but I would really like if you can tell me something I need to work on but Thanks
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ReplyDeleteHi Juan. I did read through your writing and I think that it is a great idea to do cricket because I don't really know how to play.I saw your goal and I think you have achived it so I don't know what to ask you to do to your writing but instead of doing something to your writing you could find a new goal. Anais
ReplyDeleteThank you Anais I will find a new goal
Deletehi Juan I love reading your story is very good it was very organised and I was very easy to read but i think you need to add more descriptive words.
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