Dear Chiefs,
I am going to be talking about why I should go on the horouta waka I think I will be pretty good at a lot of stuff and here are my reasons.
Firstly, I am good at navigating. I am good because I can navigate by using the sun and the stars. How I navigate by using the sun is by seeing where North, East, South and West by where the sun sets and rises so I know where I am going to. How I use the stars to navigate I use my hands.
Secondly, Why I am awesome at watching pets. I can build a pen on the waka and will check on them every day and look if they are good to eat.
Thirdly, Why I am the best at tying knots, I know how to tie a lot of knots and I am good at putting the sail up and teaching other people the strongest knot so they can help everyone.
Fourthly, I am excellent at building stuff like a pin for all the animals. I can make it really really strong and so it can survive a storm. I can also build a really awesome hut to stay in for the waka.
Fifthly, I am the greatest sailor in Hakaki and I can climb the pole then put the sail and I am really strong so I can lift really big crates and sail if you don’t know yet.
Sixthly, I am also an excerpt at fishing. I caught a lot of fish and when our food runs out I will fish for fish to eat and stack up on fish.
Seventhly, I am so bad at hunting I have never even been so I can not be good at hunting for Hawaki. I would probably die and when I shoot a gun I always miss.
I am really desperate to go on the horouta waka as you can see and I know you are a good chief and not a bad chief so I know you will put me on the horouta waka and I am good as you can see.
By: Juan de Jager Thank You
well done that was a great story to read it was very interesting but for next time I think you need to add some more descriptive words
ReplyDeleteNice work Juan if I were the chief I would let you go on the Horouta Waka but sadly I'm not. maybe you could get a cool pretend Tonga name or something instead of Juan.
ReplyDeleteHI Juan this is well-organised and has a lot of information what you're writing about, but you could add a picture to make it a bit more understanding but other than that it is amazing! From Jade.
ReplyDeleteHi, Juan awesome piece of writing but maybe next time put some more descriptive words in your writing.
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