Sport VS Music Writing
By:Juan de Jager
Sport
This is why sport is good for you. Sport is good for you because you have to go outside and have fun. If you play sports it is great for you, because you get exercise which would keep you fit and get oxygen. It is really good for you because you need fresh air.
It is like you almost need to play sport because you wouldn't get physical exercise and then your brain would not work that well. Now here is a good reason, you have fun and joy so you can spend more time with your family so sport is good and so you also don’t sit on a device.
But here is Music
This is why music in Oslo is important. Music is important because you need some time to relax in your life so that is why. Another reason is because you need to have more responsibility with music because you have to take care of your own instrument.
You might think music is boring but if you just listen it is fun and sometimes smooth. You can also learn something new inside, not outside.
Music is a good thing but some of the time it is annoying and noisy. Music is so great for your mind and brain My mum told me when you feel scared you just need to sing your favorite song and that is what I do and it really works
Good job Juan awesome piece of writing. I like how you said sport is good for you. Maybe next time make the word music smaller bu every thing else is SUPER SUPER SUPER AMAZING!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Juan i like all your reason about sports also like how you put both of them in your story and thats not how you spell also.
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